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KabbalisticVillage says
I was wondering if you guys could take a look and offer some tips.This is not me promoting myself obviously.Just experimenting with different looks,etc. http://audiojungle.net/user/KabbalisticVillage Thanks.
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gballx says

I was wondering if you guys could take a look and offer some tips.This is not me promoting myself obviously.Just experimenting with different looks,etc. http://audiojungle.net/user/KabbalisticVillage Thanks.

Looks okay – your text and images do not work together, think about the text, “Is it easy to read”. Not everyone has brilliant eyesight – colour blindness etc – my wife (who’s an eye doctor) will testify to this.

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KabbalisticVillage says

On which pictures – the main Logo or the pictures towards the bottom?

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gballx says

On which pictures – the main Logo or the pictures towards the bottom?

All of them – look at different designs, posters, CD covers, magazines – think about arrangement of objects and use space carefully!

Also way too much text for someone to read – I get the impression that traffic goes straight to the portfolio from the “homepage”.

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Waderman says

Hi Menachem, that was my first impression.
Less is more and try to think “KISS”: Keep It Stupid Simple.

Potential buyers may not get your “brand maessage” while the first view. Music Gone Wild is not the best slogan for “cutting edge” music across all styles. As we have many AJ niche specialists you should focus on what´s your “additional benefit” in this jungle.

So ask yourself: What does “Kabbalicstic Village” stands for in this market. One headline with your main message and less text for the time- and restless world.

Cheers Dirk

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gballx says

Hi Menachem, that was my first impression.
Less is more and try to think “KISS”: Keep It Stupid Simple.

Potential buyers may not get your “brand maessage” while the first view. Music Gone Wild is not the best slogan for “cutting edge” music across all styles. As we have many AJ niche specialists you should focus on what´s your “additional benefit” in this jungle.

So ask yourself: What does “Kabbalicstic Village” stands for in this market. One headline with your main message and less text for the time- and restless world.

Cheers Dirk

+1

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KabbalisticVillage says

Ok thanks.I will fix it up i think. Do you also mean less text in my description of myself,etc?

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gballx says

Ok thanks.I will fix it up i think. Do you also mean less text in my description of myself,etc?

Absolutely….also if you state cutting edge music make sure your design theme is in keeping with that to provide cohesion within your profile. Hope this helps!

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KabbalisticVillage says

Ok i changed some things around..what do you think about it now? I think the pictures are fun and exciting though. I did change the text and main logo to something more simple.

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gballx says

I personally think that your main image with exploding heads will probably convey the wrong message to prospective buyers….....think very carefully about this important image and photoshop something to customise it to suit your needs. If you have not got photoshop find someone who has – failing that send me details of what you want and I’ll do it for you.

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