Hey guys I need some serious critiques for my template I'm trying to submit

this is the second time I got rejected for this template.

Here is the template in question: Click Here

I’m pretty much at my wits end. All comments are welcome Thanks in advance.

its good, i liked it!

Man that’s what I said lol.

You should imrpove some elements such as menu and sidebar. They don’t look really good with the rest of the template. The part where’s writte ‘About Us’ in the About us page should be improved too.

I’ll be honest with you because you asked me to be so. Some parts of the template look amateur. But only a few parts. Try improving them.

And by the way. Welcome to the club. We should create like a “Rejected by ThemeForest” book at MySpace and Facebook hahaha

thanks eanki

don’t worry about being harsh at this point I need it. I’m at the point where I’ve exhausted my full knowledge of web design and anything from here would be a learning experience which I consider a plus.

for example,

header background is different color than body background – left & right borders are visible

Full Tank you can consider yourself expert, because that was one of the reasons for the second rejection I’m fixing that now.

Hi admiridon,

When you roll over the logo in the header, you are getting a 1 pixel border at the top appearing that is pushing your whole menu down a pixel.

Hey there Admiridon,
I think your navigation menu needs rethinking completely and to some lengths maybe your complete header.
Also on all your others pages the sidebar could go with a minimalistic approach by removing the 1px dividers.

i dont know if its my monitor but the page background is different tot he main header background.

I actually like this temlate – I’d change the page headings though, like the little box thing – you can keep it in there but give it some padding.

Someone else has mentioned the navigation – consider having that a fair chunk smaller and play around with some different stles – underlined is not always good enough these days, experiencemetn with putting a background to the links, hover effects and that sort of thing.

I didn’t even try it in IE6 and it’s not essential, bt it wilil help your cause.

Finally, you need to add in more html element stylings – have a page with form fields, headings, paragraph texts and a table – these things are really handy for a buyer.

Oh and 2-3 colour schemes would go down nicely.

It’s good though, the the lightbox thing is pretty nifty.