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mafloral says

Hey all

Here is a template i am working on at the moment for my next TF contribution. Let me know what you guys think.

http://lementstudios.com/hiphop/index.html

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

Anyone???

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Anps says

Cutouts (50, eminem and dre) are badly cutout.

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mafloral says

Hehe

Thanks, i know but this is just a trial so i will re do it. What do you think of the rest of the template.

Any feedback is welcome.

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sheko_elanteko says

Wow, it’s really well done design.
I totally love it, great style. The animation were really smooth and elegant.
The load time was not that bad for a template like this.
You just need a better masked images that’s all.

Good luck :)

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mafloral says

Thanks man it’s still a work in progress specially the images. This is just a rough version.

Thanks for the comment tho.

Cheers

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mafloral says

Anyone else have any comments?

Just looking for some feedback.

Cheers

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mafloral says

Hey All just bumping this to see more feedback.

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Anps says

I would change the bullets between nav text, they look weard coz of that pattern in the background.

Contact form looks to generic… to simple, you should focus on it a bit more.

Page like gigs2012… i would use more spacing everything looks a bit cramped.

Over all i would reduce the opacity on the content black background a bit.

And again bullets top right just look to edged :(

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mafloral says

Hey

Thanks for the reply, I am still refining this template so i will work on the buttons for sure as you suggested and also the bullets. I will also refine the spacing as well.

Cheers

Lester

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