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RafalBorowski
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Hi everyone. Here is a soft rejected demo:

http://demos.rafalborowski.com/cloudhoster/

Actualy this is the second soft rejection. The first didn’t say anytning about “framework areas” of the page. In the second I’ve got tnis:

The overall concept is good, but the execution required improvements and to be more creative. This is generic and plain. http://screencast.com/t/SgN8c6qVo4n http://screencast.com/t/EoGVINFYc Please remove all the logos such as AMD, Microsoft etc. I am not sure why you need these for a hosting company website. Please provide pages with purposes, not providing sample or framework. – http://screencast.com/t/AphvgPTLovzy

I would love to hear some constructive feedback from you guys. The more – the better. What to change? What to add to the main mage etc. etc.

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RafalBorowski
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Ok I’ve mostly done with the changes that were suggested by the reviewer (they are not uploaded yet). Can I have some overal thoughts about the theme? Do you think it’s good, bad etc?

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web20donkey
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I really like it. If you made the requested changes, I don’t see no reason why this wouldn’t be accepted.

Have confidence, my brother :)

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RafalBorowski
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Thank you for the kind words. Glad you like it.

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kungfu-themes
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Yeah it looks good.

I think the reviewer is saying don’t just put the bootstrap loading bars down without showing context with your theme.

You can use them, but with an example as to why it would go with your hosting theme.

Other than that, just follow the instructions and add a few more graphics.

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RafalBorowski
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Thank’s for feedback. I’ve also added dark version now. http://demos.rafalborowski.com/cloudhoster/

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manuelvega
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will be approved quickly :P

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RafalBorowski
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will be approved quickly :P

Doesn’t seem so :/ Third rejection. This time it only says:

Visual hierarchy is important and you shouldn’t confuse the user of which to click – http://screencast.com/t/ZNgq3wLa

Generic and plain – http://screencast.com/t/aLlvhDOIhttp://screencast.com/t/mvsJjtj2wZ
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kungfu-themes
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The first screen, what the reviewer means by visual hierarchy is the size of the buttons and text must go from biggest to smallest, top -> bottom.

Or just get rid of the buttons in the middle.

For the others maybe add a few subtle shadows.

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