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danielartro says

How can i improve this design ?
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DusskDesign says

I my opinion those box shadows doesn’t look that good, try to remove them and the background shouldn’t be all white, think about that. Also tipograpy on top should be improved..

Just my opinions

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Alexlasek says

no offense but your flyer looks out-dated, like from 90`s
IMO, colours are bad, typography doesn`t look good and those shadows…

It`s more like a mess rather than an idea.
You should start from scratch.. sorry to say that ;(

Cheers
Alex

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Amrhamza says

i think you just need better box styles, something futuristic , search for tutorials on how to make dark futuristic styles

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wallfish says
Shapes, contrast gradient & effects.
  • The top section has to triangulated fragments which are not symmetrically placed on each sides.
  • Embossed effect looks a bit outdated.
  • Use better icons for representation.
  • Use a different shades of red. As current is hitting eyes and also has close gradient pinch.
  • Text paragraph looks hanging.
  • May be use a faded background.
Good Luck :)
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