In my opinion it looks cool.. but.. Your page titles are a bit too big for the rest of your content. Maybe you sould try smaller font and the height of that “line” should be a bit smaller too.
I hope this helps. Good luck and don’t give up
Looks cool man! I agree with @pixel-industry.
Like your site, looks clean and simple, but i think are missing some pieces.
Index : Will be better to put From Portfolio part, because its to empty, the people will like to use the portfolio in our index page.
Portfolio: You have spacing issue between blocks.
Please check the zip folder, i do some screenshots.http://www38.zippyshare.com/v/78826675/file.html
Hope help this!
Oh Thank you very very much !!! Your advices really great help me and now I know what I will do
I wish you many more great works