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danielartro says

I got soft rejected this item and i run out of ideas .Can you give me some feedback please ?

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Amrhamza says

what was the reviewer recommendation ?

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gbs says

I think that it’s because of the typography. Maybe you should try a combination of sans and serif for the design, rather than using different serif fonts together. Just my two cents :)

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danielartro says

That said: The flyer here will need a lot more work and improvements and not just small editing of the type elements. Consider putting more work into the file here and improve the looks. Think of working more on the composition of the flyer as well.

Thank you for the feedback gbs

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Amrhamza says

try to change the background to black carbon fiber texture

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danielartro says

Thank you very much for feedback :)

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LondonGraphics says

Maybe because of the spelling error at the bottom.

www.yourwebsitett name.com – It’s got 2 letter ‘t’s and a space between website and name.

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mihaimcm says

HA lol the first time I sow the pic I tought hmm that is not bad the text probably couldav been changed but it works…well at least the composition is good ,then I sow that you posted the reviewer comment where he said that the composition need to be changed XD Well the composition is good becouse of the pictures the angle in them are very intresting if an other person try to use your template he wont get the same resoult becouse he maybe doesnt have cool pictures like those that you used ,try to look at your template without any pictures in it and see if it look atractive (it wont :P) p.s I’m not sorry for the bad eng

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LuisFaus says

Well you probably have fixed this item already, but in any case let me give you my constructive criticism;

The flyer even though having a nice composition, lacks usability. Because your images in the presentation are going to change by the ones the buyer is going to put in. Therefore the black background of the augmented picture of the car will be replaced by probably a more colorful one, thus making the text completely unreadable.

Also as mentioned before, the fonts are too plain, they should be sans – states modern -. In which now, it clashes modern and fast with traditional and slow.

Another issue is that, the buyer might want to advertise his garage business openly, and even though you have a big nice title at the top, you have a tiny little telephone number and website at the bottom. Therefore making your flyer not very desirable since normally people with businesses like their phone numbers and web urls quite big.

There is more details that I would go into, but I don’t want to comment further in case I make you angry with my criticism.

:)

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wallfish says

Well you probably have fixed this item already, but in any case let me give you my constructive criticism;

The flyer even though having a nice composition, lacks usability. Because your images in the presentation are going to change by the ones the buyer is going to put in. Therefore the black background of the augmented picture of the car will be replaced by probably a more colorful one, thus making the text completely unreadable.

Also as mentioned before, the fonts are too plain, they should be sans – states modern -. In which now, it clashes modern and fast with traditional and slow.

Another issue is that, the buyer might want to advertise his garage business openly, and even though you have a big nice title at the top, you have a tiny little telephone number and website at the bottom. Therefore making your flyer not very desirable since normally people with businesses like their phone numbers and web urls quite big.

There is more details that I would go into, but I don’t want to comment further in case I make you angry with my criticism.

:)

I guess this items has been approved in his profile. But yea your comments are pretty constructive. :)

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