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danielartro
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I got 5 soft rejction :( and i don’t know what to do to this item

That’s what they said and i do not understand why i got rejected after every update it: You have not improved the typography nor the look and feel of this flyer. You only did a few minor improvements and these are not sufficient. The flyer still looks simplistic and requires more work.

Thank you :)

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Amrhamza
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cause it screams typography issue man, and revs here are like ” The Gods Of Typography ” and to help you out , GO TO http://www.google.com/webfonts and choose the font of your liking then press on pairing tab and you will find a numerous other fonts that works well with the font of your choice and good luck :)

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wallfish
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The flyer still looks simplistic and requires more work.

cause it screams typography issue man

Yup, agreed with Amrhamza. Use different fonts and if you see the image on both sides are very slightly stretched. May be try correcting those too. May be include stuff like company’s social links or a little more detail. Because I’m sure every company wants more footer than the one you have right now. Try dividing paragraphs in two which gives it a little more breathing space.

Hope it helps :) Good luck with re-submission!

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danielartro
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Thank you very much for your help :)

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