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You should also try using this tool, I notice you have some issues with typography spacing! Try this tool out, it’s amazing! :)

As for the rest, pretty cute design! Ivor nailed it! Polish it up a lot! ;)

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Ivor
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Well i must say many thanks, to be honest I wasn’t expecting such a reaction as I usually get one comment which isn’t very helpful!

Like I mentioned my previous design got rejected for being too consistant so I thought I would just put something together with different element.

I might have a go at finishing it off.

Many thanks again!

This suits better in Site Templates though. Code it up. :)

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Designed2
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Hi Ivor,

Code the Slash design or the Martom?

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SteveVanDijk
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With one solid design i meant Balance, your design still can have different parts…

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I think you need to work on the typography, You can get some pretty cool fonts from google webfonts and some nice textures from subtlepatterns.com. Apart from that I think its a pretty cool design. Keep it up :)

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mosaicpro
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I think if you would do the following things it will increase the chances of being approved:

  • Choose another/multiple font(s): Arial everywhere looks a bit dull
  • Improve/refine your main menu … add some style to it or make it so it has a particularity not just regular font…
  • Make the headings/subheadings match… one thing I noticed it’s hard to distinguish what is a heading or subheading .. methodology vs flow
  • Use better font size and maybe check some elite members how they space everything out
  • Make the recent post section cleaner… links with blue regular text with white… your text & links are the same color (BAD)...
  • Maybe use more color shades in text/links etc… same idea as the twitter line…
  • Use better font sizes & spacing to make the item look more professional

Hope it helps.

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nackle2k10
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You should also try using this tool, I notice you have some issues with typography spacing! Try this tool out, it’s amazing! :)

As for the rest, pretty cute design! Ivor nailed it! Polish it up a lot! ;)

Note: these are my personal opinions as an individual member and author of this community and not representative of Envato Staff or the Envato Item Reviewers. My personal opinion does not guarantee the approval of this file for sale on the Envato Marketplaces.

Nice Tool man! Thanks

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