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Enabled Volunteer moderator says

You should also try using this tool, I notice you have some issues with typography spacing! Try this tool out, it’s amazing! :)

As for the rest, pretty cute design! Ivor nailed it! Polish it up a lot! ;)

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Ivor Reviewer says

Well i must say many thanks, to be honest I wasn’t expecting such a reaction as I usually get one comment which isn’t very helpful!

Like I mentioned my previous design got rejected for being too consistant so I thought I would just put something together with different element.

I might have a go at finishing it off.

Many thanks again!

This suits better in Site Templates though. Code it up. :)

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Designed2 says

Hi Ivor,

Code the Slash design or the Martom?

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Ivor Reviewer says

Martom

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SteveVanDijk says

With one solid design i meant Balance, your design still can have different parts…

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FortisThemes says

I think you need to work on the typography, You can get some pretty cool fonts from google webfonts and some nice textures from subtlepatterns.com. Apart from that I think its a pretty cool design. Keep it up :)

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mosaicpro says

I think if you would do the following things it will increase the chances of being approved:

  • Choose another/multiple font(s): Arial everywhere looks a bit dull
  • Improve/refine your main menu … add some style to it or make it so it has a particularity not just regular font…
  • Make the headings/subheadings match… one thing I noticed it’s hard to distinguish what is a heading or subheading .. methodology vs flow
  • Use better font size and maybe check some elite members how they space everything out
  • Make the recent post section cleaner… links with blue regular text with white… your text & links are the same color (BAD)...
  • Maybe use more color shades in text/links etc… same idea as the twitter line…
  • Use better font sizes & spacing to make the item look more professional

Hope it helps.

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nackle2k10 says

You should also try using this tool, I notice you have some issues with typography spacing! Try this tool out, it’s amazing! :)

As for the rest, pretty cute design! Ivor nailed it! Polish it up a lot! ;)

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Nice Tool man! Thanks

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