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rayoflightt says

I need advice about typography for my rejected template. Reason for rejection was that it is not unique enough but what bothers me the most is that other reasons for rejection were: bad typography, spacing inconsistencies and excessive usage of patterns.

I really try to improve my typography and learn a lot about that but still I got the same critique.

If someone could tell me what exactly is wrong with my typography in my template and where are spacing issues? I’ve used Google font “Droid Sans” for template.

my template: http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/5802/greenxs.jpg http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/2306/snap20120518at174727.jpg http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9192/snap20120518at175054.jpg

Someone’s advice would really mean to me about this issue. Thank you.

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4riS says

Well, i don’t like the background (background pattern) and in my opinion menu font-size should be a little bit bigger.

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rayoflightt says

Well, i don’t like the background (background pattern) and in my opinion menu font-size should be a little bit bigger.
After so much time looking at that pattern I also started to dislike it. :) You may be right about menu font size. Anyone else? I suppose there is some bigger issue with my typography and spacing if that was mentioned as first critique.
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