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Hey guys, first of all thank you for taking your time to read this.

Alright here it goes…

My flyer was soft rejected, the reason being:

“This design is looking interesting, The concept is new though the typography is lacking. Please rework the typography and try to provide a better looking design.”

And here is my flyer: [CLICK HERE ]

What exactly do you guys think i should change?

Any opinion matters so please… let me hear it.

Thank you! :)

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gbs
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Nice design :) . Just some suggestions for you:

- The “Late Night Party” headline here is a bit fade off. It’s the big headline so make it more impressive. Change the font, add up some effects, may be?

- The other texts like “DJ blah blah” need another font. Seems like you’re using Calibri if I’m not wrong? Change it please, it’d improve much ;)

Good luck :)

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Nice design :) . Just some suggestions for you:

- The “Late Night Party” headline here is a bit fade off. It’s the big headline so make it more impressive. Change the font, add up some effects, may be?

- The other texts like “DJ blah blah” need another font. Seems like you’re using Calibri if I’m not wrong? Change it please, it’d improve much ;)

Good luck :)

Thank you for your suggestion gbs, on it!

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