I need your help guys! [Flyer - Soft Reject]

Hey guys, first of all thank you for taking your time to read this.

Alright here it goes…

My flyer was soft rejected, the reason being:

“This design is looking interesting, The concept is new though the typography is lacking. Please rework the typography and try to provide a better looking design.”

And here is my flyer: [CLICK HERE ]

What exactly do you guys think i should change?

Any opinion matters so please… let me hear it.

Thank you!

Nice design . Just some suggestions for you:

- The “Late Night Party” headline here is a bit fade off. It’s the big headline so make it more impressive. Change the font, add up some effects, may be?

- The other texts like “DJ blah blah” need another font. Seems like you’re using Calibri if I’m not wrong? Change it please, it’d improve much

Good luck

gbs said
Nice design . Just some suggestions for you:

- The “Late Night Party” headline here is a bit fade off. It’s the big headline so make it more impressive. Change the font, add up some effects, may be?

- The other texts like “DJ blah blah” need another font. Seems like you’re using Calibri if I’m not wrong? Change it please, it’d improve much

Good luck

Thank you for your suggestion gbs, on it!