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LifeForset says

Hi to all:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/elabvrh5xa674xe/01_home.png

If accepted .psd it or not? :(

Regards.

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LifeForset says

please help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Wpsmart says

you should need some improvement. (i think) try different color for black color background.i cant see your fonts, and font colors clearly in this picture. so i cant say anything about your typography. add modern images for portfolio.

Good luck :)

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ThemeHome says

hi before submission you should improve section portfolio. The image inside this section should have more several. goodluck.

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LifeForset says

Thanks for help me, I fix and submit :) regards :D

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AlexFjord says

Sorry you are a long long way off the standard.

The typography is not good (esp. all the different alignments that cause spacing issues and section titles)

The repetitive images in the gallery just looks lazy

There is nothing to it – nothing original and feels incomplete

Spacing and alignment is way off – just look at the pricing tables and testimonials they are not even spaced correctly

The hierarchy is not really there at all

Honestly I know you are keen to submit but like your other posts learning to design to the level for here takes a lot of time and you must not rush

If as in your other posts you know how to code I would suggest focusing on finding a design partner to work with if you are in a rush to get files for sale BUT (and obviously have not seen any of your code) be aware that understanding HTML/CSS and or WP is VERY different from being able to write it to the required level for here too.

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LifeForset says

i understand you but many thanks for help me:) regards,

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LifeForset says

Now yes more better my template .psd that before :) I already fix as say AlexFjord I learn how function website professional :) I happy thanks for all for help me!

see all: I studient university design graphic but first year, lacking 3 years more I will learn better my website and psd I can author here various years :D

demo web better: https://www.dropbox.com/s/m53zkmfb3iy5rar/02_preview.png

Regards to all :)

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LifeForset says

efectiva

Many thanks for says I not be believe you because problem that you are envious.

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