Ideas for a rejected template

Hello, i made refinements on this PSD template that was rejected

here is how it currently looks like https://dl.dropbox.com/u/43647490/Shante_Blue_v3.png

Does it look like a template that can be accepted for sale in this market?

tell me about your ideas before i make the color variations of the template and resubmit it.

thanks,

• Widget area (twitter feed, about us, follow us..) looks weird (height is too high I think)
• “We are profesionnal in building the right app for your business” -> Effect behind the text doesn’t feel good..

doubleF said
Hi Jss4ever ! Personally, I found it very beautiful Just:

• Widget area (twitter feed, about us, follow us..) looks weird (height is too high I think)
• “We are profesionnal in building the right app for your business” -> Effect behind the text doesn’t feel good..

Just my opinion, hope it will help you
Regards,
F²

Thanks a lot dear, i appreciate it i’ll apply your suggestion and resubmit the theme, and then let u know.

Wish me luck

Thanks again.

doubleF said
Hi Jss4ever ! Personally, I found it very beautiful Just:

• Widget area (twitter feed, about us, follow us..) looks weird (height is too high I think)
• “We are profesionnal in building the right app for your business” -> Effect behind the text doesn’t feel good..

Just my opinion, hope it will help you
Regards,
F²

Thanks a lot dear, i appreciate it i’ll apply your suggestion and resubmit the theme, and then let u know.

Wish me luck

Thanks again.