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dansjostedt
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Hey what more should I improve? I changed the fonts so that they are the same, made a few more elements & made everything into smart objects as I got a tip about doing that…

What more do I have to do before this can actually be accepted?

image preview: http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/248/5/f/projex___one_page_business_theme__updated__by_c3developement-d6l1pfd.jpg

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manuelvega
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why not, improove it. But i think you will need to redesign team, pricing, clients & news.

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vuzzu
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Hi dansjotedt your design looks nice, but in the end you’re the creative making the difference on your products your vision should be clear. Of course feedback and suggestions are nice.

Great job though.

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dansjostedt
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Thanks for the feedback, as you can see through the link bellow I started to work on some improvements.. dunno if you guys thinks it is better or worse but I guess I learn as I go along =)

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/254/2/a/projex___one_page_business_theme__updated__by_c3developement-d6l1pfd.jpg
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BenSheppard
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Nothing looks connected all looks like different parts of different websites

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Dzinc
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This thread is now in › Item Discussion

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dansjostedt
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Nothing looks connected all looks like different parts of different websites

Any suggestions on how to improve that or tips on how to make it look as one unit?

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