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IngeniousArtist says

Hey guys,

Gave a flyer few days ago, got rejected… please give me your feedback, would appreciate it…

Rejection details: Unfortunately your submission Summer Splash Party Flyer Template isn’t ready for GraphicRiver and cannot be resubmitted as it did not meet our minimum requirements for quality and/or marketplace policies. In order for submissions to be considered for sale they must be of high aesthetic and technical quality, unique to our library and cannot be in violation of Envato’s policies. Please see our Knowledgebase for more information: http://support.envato.com/index.php?/Knowledgebase/List

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LunarDesigns says

You have a good base to start with but your typography is lost in the background . Try using other fonts , Colors and styles .

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unlockedart says

There is just way to much going on. Everything just gets lost, there is no main focal point. when I first look at it I am confused. Make the most important thing stand out and work your way down the line. The text is all just to hard to read, I cant read any of it so make that pop out more.

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IngeniousArtist says

Thanks guys :) Appreciate it and will work on that

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ShahX says

Typography!! All you need to work on! :) Overall looks Good! ;)

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IngeniousArtist says

Thanks, i do have a problem on typography :|

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DarkstarDesigns says

the typography defiantly need work, not on the same level as a lot of the other flyer around, and the blend of vectors and photos just does not work, and the yellow background it a bit much!

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IngeniousArtist says

Thanks for your feedback, this will definitely help me make a good flyer :)

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