I’ve listened in my monitor headphones.
My opinion is the same as LG_sound’s.
Make the bass line a bit more quiet.
High bass in range 160-250Hz is definitely too loud, low bass is ok. I’d cut high bass range a lot, maybe even several dB less.
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