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web20donkey says

Hi everyone. I started creating a new theme, and I was wondering if you can give me some feedback.

Here is the URL: http://www.tipszilla.com/temp/

Thank you very much.

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JoeMcKie says

It’s nice at the moment but I think there’s a few things I’d change before I would submit it – the main thing that stood out to me was the font choice at the foot of the page. It’s a little pixellated – I’m not sure if that’s accurate or whether it’s the PNG, but it’s a little difficult to read!

Other than that, aside from maybe a few colour tweaks etc, it looks nice. I’d suggest perhaps posting a working copy so people can look at the code, too?

Hope it helps!

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m-elgendy says

i think there is some problems with text.

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web20donkey says

Thanks for suggestions. I modified the text, can you look up now? TY.

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PaddyTaylor says

Is this going to be a PSD/HTML or WP?

If it is PSD then the attention to detail needs some work.

I am still not sure the typography is right and the fonts are the best choice.

Other than that visually looks a bit blurry as was said but that could be the image and design wise it looks cool – good luck with the rest of it.

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manuelvega says

I think it’s a little bit messy , have no details & typography can be improoved ..

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web20donkey says

Thank you for your replies. Is it going to be a HTML/WP, is not gonna be a PSD file. I improved the typography a little bit more. Can you give me some extra feedback?

Thank you

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kungfu-themes says

I think the typo is better, but that is only because the font is sharper, maybe if you anti aliased the other font it would look good. Not sure how you’re doing this though.

Are you just taking screenshots of your hosted HTML file or is this a .psd file?

I liked the original design with the circles on the icons and the slight inner shadow. This new icon design looks too flat and boring.

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web20donkey says

This is a psd file for now. I want to make it look eye catching, and then slce it to wordpress. What font you mean to be antialiased, the headings, or the content font?

Regarding the other matter, I will hange back to circles :)

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kungfu-themes says

I’m talking about the body font. Additionally, you have spacing issues, are you using a grid system because the arrow on the slider are not center aligned.

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