I think the paragraphs needs more line height, but that’s not the problem, the layout looks like a lot to other existing items, envato is looking for new trends in design your salvation is to add features to stand out, i think.
BTW the design isn’t bad, but looks generic.
It looks good but it is not responsive and this is not good especially in landing page category …
Thanks @SaikouDesign , @egemenerd for the feedback. Will try to improve on your suggestions.
Its fine but as they said you need to change the layout, seems very simple .. try something more original
I think SaikouDesign is Correct , you need some effects and animations like Hovers, Sliders , also the content seems too tight to each other may be you can try a 1040px or more , instead of 960px width..
Must make it responsive forsure to get any Consideration from TF(purely my opinion).