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99fusion
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I recently created a simple landing page and was hard rejected. The reason cited was uniqueness and new design features. Preview link : http://99fusion.com/BlinkLandingPage/ I have tried to be unique but still it has been rejected. Any feedback would be highly appreciated.

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SaikouDesign
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I think the paragraphs needs more line height, but that’s not the problem, the layout looks like a lot to other existing items, envato is looking for new trends in design :( your salvation is to add features to stand out, i think.

BTW the design isn’t bad, but looks generic.

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egemenerd
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It looks good but it is not responsive and this is not good especially in landing page category …

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Thanks @SaikouDesign , @egemenerd for the feedback. Will try to improve on your suggestions.

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manuelvega
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Its fine but as they said you need to change the layout, seems very simple .. try something more original

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Ameh
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I think SaikouDesign is Correct , you need some effects and animations like Hovers, Sliders , also the content seems too tight to each other may be you can try a 1040px or more , instead of 960px width..

Must make it responsive forsure to get any Consideration from TF(purely my opinion).

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Thanks @manuelvega, @Ameh for the feedback. I’m making it responsive as well as adding some more features.

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