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OrangeIdea
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=== Why We’ve Declined Your Submission === 1.Your template has a good start but, as we have high standards, you will need to make some additional improvements in overall aesthetics and aspects such as typography, graphics, and spacing. 2. There are lots of inconsistent spacing/padding issues throughout the design. I’d like you to go over it with a fine toothed comb and weed out these basic design issues. 3. This is important— try to make your theme’s design more unique. Adding features, options and styles will help increase your template’s value and increase its ability to be approved. However, a unique design will be a key factor for approval. 4. Overall, it has a good starting concept and it seems you’ve aimed for simplicity, but the overall design lacks refinement in its design that would help it stand out as more unique. At this point, you’ll need to improve the design and make it more unique before it will be ready for ThemeForest. 5. Even with the current design, a significant increase in the polish of the various aspects of the theme may just swing the decision in your favor. Right now, it doesn’t feel like a premium theme.

What needs to be changed or fixed? I’d like some feedback on it to get accepted. Any critique are welcome!

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authorandrew
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Your typography could be a little bit more consistent, I think. You have some san-serif headlines, but then the java-script switcher is serifed. Maybe give all headings a consistent font/style, as a start?

Other than that…it is a very nice template :)

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GopalDasa
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typography can be little bit issue as ” authordandrew ” explained.

Few things you can consider – Menu bar – Maybe, font seems too smaller too me, you may incresae it and give some option for user to increase the size.

Header – may be, it can be big for some people so give some option to make it flexible.

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dynamicpress
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Very nice theme.
I agree with the comments above regarding typography.
Furthermore I think that the color changer for a slider with a choice of only a few colors may not the best solution. I would think more about color chooser in this place. This would allow for better control over the appearance of this area, especially while using pattern
Good luck :)
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OrangeIdea
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Hello again.

Thank you for all feedback. 5 times resubmitting and rejected.

From last rejection i have received 2 screenshots: http://screencast.com/t/v3WxYBJ0tV1j http://screencast.com/t/YC3MaKazy

Certainly I will correct it, but my reviewer said that i need feedback from more sources…

So I’d like some feedback (Any critique are welcome!).

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Thank you!

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web_gab
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I hope you realize you’re very close from being accepted. This is a typical soft rejection message so don’t give up. Just go over the template and do the fixes (for instance I’ve noticed the slider navigation buttons are not ok, as the numbers are still visible in google chrome – perhaps a text-indent issue). The template looks very good and I am 100% it will end up being accepted! So don’t give up!

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OrangeIdea
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web_gab, thank you!

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OrangeIdea
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Has uploaded yesterday the new version. And now – ‘Temporarily held by the review team.’ 0_o

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OrangeIdea
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QARK Modern – HTML Template has been approved for sale. Thank you all!

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dynamicpress
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Good luck :)

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