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BenSheppard says

http://ohlookawebsite.com/freshface/

I just knocked this little template up, still needs a LOAD of work done, as it is only a homepage right now, Just wanted to know what you thought, before I start leading myself down the wrong road!

Cheers, Ben!

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BenSheppard says

Anyone? Anything?

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bmattila says

Clean, interesting (smart feature, by making the “fog” move) – with a good combination of your colour choises.

For what purpose are you making this / what’s the message you want to send ?

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Br0 says

I love the concept of the menu vs the background image with the fog over it, nice idea, i think that it has a future.

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BenSheppard says

Clean, interesting (smart feature, by making the “fog” move) – with a good combination of your colour choises. For what purpose are you making this / what’s the message you want to send ?

I love the concept of the menu vs the background image with the fog over it, nice idea, i think that it has a future.

Thank you very much I plan to have that “fog” effect to be easy to change different patterns and directions.

The colour is also a single colour that the user can pick that generates all of these highlight colours.

Thank you very much for the feedback! Will definitely be working hard on it the next few weeks.

Regards, Ben.

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x4er0 says

“Need criticism” ? Ok.

shadows and boxes looks terrible.
too thick border
bad alignment in footer

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BenSheppard says

“Need criticism” ? Ok.

shadows and boxes looks terrible.
too thick border
bad alignment in footer

Shadows and boxes of the “blog posts” Thick border? On the navagation?

What do you think would be better? All in the middle? align with the boxes above it?

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mazoor says

Don’t call it “Freshface”.
If I do remember correctly, turkhitbox wanted to call one of his items “Kriesi” about a year ago. Good marketing move, but bad ethics. It would not be tolerated.

If I was Freshface I would not tolerate a theme looking as horrible as this one having my name branded on it. Typography, graphics, whitespace, originality – everything is very poor.

Good luck!

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Don’t call it “Freshface”.
If I do remember correctly, turkhitbox wanted to call one of his items “Kriesi” about a year ago. Good marketing move, but bad ethics. It would not be tolerated.

If I was Freshface I would not tolerate a theme looking as horrible as this one having my name branded on it. Typography, graphics, whitespace, originality – everything is very poor.

Good luck!

I was unaware that freshface already existed.

As for the review. Brutal haha! What would you suggest for improvement?

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