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rtofvnt says

Hallo fellow designers.

I’m not very often in this area of envato marketplace, however I decided to try if I can come up with some templates. So far I’ve got one, but it doesn’t sell very well. Seems like there are some others much better in this category.

Recently I’ve finished landing page for hosting services. It is “softly” rejected, but I would be really happy if some of you guys with more experience could put some lights where to improve. I’ve asked already through support, but I believe more input I’ll get, better product I can offer.

Reviewer pointed out typography and white spaces. I can’t deny any of this.

I do apologize if we don’t discuss that kind of subjects in this forum and if so please let me know. http://www.csselite.pl/hosting_landing_page/ is it just bad or veeeeeery bad ?

Cheers!

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LoveThemes says

Heres a few thoughts:

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rtofvnt says

Thanks Scott,

So far I’ve found some time to make few changes but it is still not finished.

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rtofvnt says

Ok,

There it is – quite a few changes: http://www.csselite.pl/hosting_landing_page/index.html

What do you think guys – is it ready ?

Cheers.

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RelStudios says

Ok,

There it is – quite a few changes: http://www.csselite.pl/hosting_landing_page/index.html

What do you think guys – is it ready ?

Cheers.

I like your landing page but in my opinion there are some few issue regarding your logo :) logo seems nice but tweet slightly it will be more better enough :) use cufon and change the font style it will get nice look and use slider promo which helps your customer to deal with new features and which also helps in increasing your sales :) Others are fine :)

Best of luck :)

Regards,

Satish

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