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RenFromPenn says

Hi,

Could you please take a look at this design and give me your opinions? I would like to know if you think that it would be accepted and sell well here at ThemeForest.

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CreativeMilk says

Not bad, very minimalistic and clean but the preview image is a little bit to small ;)

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RenFromPenn says

I made the preview bigger so that you all can get a better look.

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purethemes says

you need to work a little bit more imho, now it looks like some more advanced wireframe

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PixelBin says

Is your server down? I can’t view the image. :X

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RenFromPenn says

Yeah, the server is down. I have a support ticket in to the host, so hopefully it will be fixed soon. Oh, and I didn’t base this on a wireframe, so if it looks like one, then that is purely accidental.

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blabus says

I still can’t view it.

EDIT : Nevermind. :)

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altinkum says

veru good and l would add more colour options

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Jaffy says

I agree with altinkum and rzepak – you’re off to a good start, but I think it’s lacking depth and texture right now, as all sections only have flat color.

Check out this article on adding the ‘polish’ to your designs – it really helped me, and goes to show the dramatic difference that can be achieved with very small details on things like highlighting edges, gradients, alignment of separate content elements, etc.

http://tinyurl.com/av52uk

Good luck, and keep it up!

Jaffy

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RenFromPenn says

Thank you all for the feedback. I’m glad to hear that you at least think that the design shows promise. :-)

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