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simonswiss
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Hey there,

after having my first item approved on GR (a logo), i decided to give a shot with a mascot creation kit. There are already some amazing monster creation kits out there, so i tried to base my mascots on the theme of clouds, to bring something a little bit different..

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Your feedback would be greatly appreciated, as i am kinda new in the graphic design world..

Thanks in advance! :-)

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-axnorpix
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Hi simonswiss bro,

Its nice design..i think the pink one need refine the shape.. try to add little more icon..

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iamthwee
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I think they’re great. Did you make this in inkscape?

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Amrhamza
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Its an awesome kit, it needs more shadows to give it depth :) , try to add a sponge to look like spongebob

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simonswiss
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Thanks guys!

@iamthwee yes this was made in inkscape.

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iamthwee
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I really like your style! I think this has a good chance of getting accepted… The only things I would change are more depth. So an inner shadow… perhaps an outline for the characters…

Other than that I think it is ready for sale.

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simonswiss
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Thank you for the good feedback! It got approved as is, but i’ll take your suggestions into consideration for my next items! :-)

Simon

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