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beerlover says

Unfortunately your submission Movie Template Shark City isn’t quite ready for GraphicRiver. Here’s some feedback from our Review team on why it couldn’t be accepted.

dasYou need to work over this concept further here, considering the general composition and layout as the file is too similar to other items on the site and needs making more original and different through the use of alternate typefaces and compositional styles and themes.

You need to work on the typeface pairing of the item here somewhat. Consider the general look and feel as it looks that little bit generic and the combination of fonts doesn’t quite gel together.

Take a look over the following link for a little help:

They said it’s too similair, and the pairingfonts isn’t good. but it is a very unique concept right? Any suggestions?

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unlockedart says

Like the concept, but they are right the fonts need work. The top names just pop to much maybe tone the red down a bit. The word shark make some blood dripping off those hanging down points, and make the blood look more real and believable. The coming soon is just lost in the background that needs to pop more. Again there are tons of things right in this flyer, great concept, so keep working and you will get it right.

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beerlover says

thnx mate

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beerlover says

Approved thnx

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