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DizajnMagazin says

What do you think, about this brochure, have you any suggestions so I can reupload it. Personaly I think it shouldn’t be rejected, and its looking decent.. Here is preview image set where you can see all pages..

http://dizajnmagazin.com/graphicriver/colorfull-brochure.jpg
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kaixer says

Font used not suitable and too many words.

That’s just my 2 cents. :)

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tommusrhodus says

Immediately I’m not sure why this would be rejected, until I looked at some of your other work, it’s great (the current submitted stuff)!

By the looks of your rejection above, I would say it simply doesn’t represent your best work, I think you could give it a bit more love and give the layout a bit more breathing room, like Kaixer said, it’s a bit cramped in there!

Hope this helps :)

Peace

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DizajnMagazin says

Hey guys thanks for your answers. I guess I was blinded with frontpage so I didnt tdo my best with the pages.. I’ll make some new pages and remove those with to much text, now I see they dont really fit :)

About font its Myriard and Arial so i guess thats ok?

I think you could give it a bit more love and give the layout a bit more breathing room

Will try to do that and then reupload ;)

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ConstantinPotorac Envato team says

Try working on the design some more. At the moment the design is really standard and not helping raising the bar.

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