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Dzinc Staff says

This thread is now in › Item Discussion

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hoanggiang12 says

I think you need to improve your design!
And read carefully why this is rejected then fix it

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feydesign says

Thank you for advice, and i always improve my design, but i think my flyer isn’t bad :-)

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hueyangdesigns says

Might be the font choices. for some reason I’m not liking the digital watch font. Nut good luck :D

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EladChai says

Very, very messy and unappealing design.

Take a look at some Graphicriver flyers and familiarize yourself with the quality.

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unlockedart says

VERY MESSY, To much random items, clean up the file. Remove the satisfaction guarantee label, thats not needed and just dosent fit the flyer. All the items on the bottom could also be removed as they add nothing to the design, only clutter. Like EladChai said take a look at other peoples flyers and take a look at the quality files and take standards from them.

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hawkmax says

+1 Elad and Unlockedart

I m sure the reviewer comment also included something about quality and the font pairing.

Your flyer isn’t bad but there is a good amount of scope for improvement. The advice would be browse through the GR flyer for calculating the Quality.

Goodluck

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feydesign says

Dzinc (staff envato), Hoanggiang 12, Hueyangdesigns, Eladchai, Unlockedart, Hawkmax, Thanks all for advice, sure should can do about my flyer must be clean , clear and customize… :-)

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