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StarSeller
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hi to all:

demo: http://ncdesignerr.com/demo/soonfull/images/

Please help me!

Thanks, Regards

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simonswiss
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I am afraid it will not be accepted. In order to bring it up to the level you need, you have to:

1. Validate the HTML errors: http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fncdesignerr.com%2Fdemo%2Fsoonfull%2Fimages%2F&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline&group=0

2. Improve the design – the flashing text is not looking too good and is more a distraction than anything

3. fix the submit form that has no validation at this point (you can submit empty field and it says “succesfully sent”, which will not be very useful for users purchasing it

4. add more features – right now it’s just a logo and a clock – there are already too many countdown templates out there with more functionality.

That’s a start. Take it from there and build your way up! :-)

PS: Also, i think you meant under construction, not constitution.

PS2: for threads like this, you need to post in “Item Discussion”.

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goofydadog
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Flashing text is not a good idea. Makes me dizzy! Try polish the design a little. Get rid of the scroll bars. It can end up looking quite nice if you get it right.

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StarSeller
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Thanks for your help, I fix my website, I forgot validation w3c ):

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