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DAStyle
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Hello everyone,

Here is my first item on VideoHive

Red Wine Poured Into Glass

Link: http://videohive.net/item/red-wine-poured-into-glass/3646796

I would like your opinion,

Thanks

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addeystock
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Welcome to the hive.Read forum rules friend. Self promotion is not allowed.
http://support.envato.com/index.php?/Knowledgebase/Article/View/261/41/forum-and-community-rules

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Mocarg
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Since self promotion is not allowed on the forum i’ve moved it to “Items Discussion” so you can get opinions by fellow authors. :)

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DAStyle
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Thanks, I’m not promoting my items, this is just for your opinion. :)

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Generator
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It’s nice. But do take the point about self promotion :)

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DSCMarketing
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The soft boxes lighting gear is way to prevalent in the glass reflection. Me…. I would find a way to defuse it more. Just looking at the lighting gear in the reflection of the glass and the room…. I would turn the soft boxes 180 and try bouncing the light or just different defusers. Does that help? ...Certainly not the self promotion bit the others are chiding you about….

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Inoxide
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Self Promotion aside, i agree with DSCMarketing – also, focus-wise, the image is somewhat ‘soft’.

But my main concern is the frame rate appears to be artificially slowed down (perhaps to make the footage longer?) ... this has the effect of causing a jerky/stuttering outcome, as opposed to a genuinely slow-motion (+1000fps) shot of fluid pouring into a glass.

But the idea is great and this will definitely sell. keep up the good work !

Panda

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