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Comy says

Well i think it`s finished but i need a new set of eyes to review it.

If you people have any suggestions please tell me :)

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/9191/blueish.jpg

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settysantu says

Nice design comy, layout is fine i think alignment and line-height need to be adjusted.

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denkGroot says

Not bad. By the looks I guess it is a businesss template. I wouldn’t use serif fonts on it. You sould try using some sans serif like Arial for your headings. Also, if you remove the indent that you created for your headings you could get a bit more structure in your design. Keep it up!

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denkGroot says

Oops—wrong thread.

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Comy says

Ok i tweaked it a bit here and there…

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/3650/blueish1.jpg

Any other remarks?

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LoveThemes says

Not a chance sorry.

You have typography, spacing and hierarchy issues and the design is very, very dated, looks like you designed this back in 2000.

Study design more, checkout trends on dribbble then give it another shot.

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