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agodesa says

Hello Envato!

Today, thanks to Jeffrey Way :) , I made my FIRST web page. It needs all the content but I made it! Please, give me some feedback, what can i add? or remove?

Here’s the link:

http://santiagodegetau.com/

Cheers!

-Agodesa

PS If sharing this link is not valide. Sorry. :D

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Lamovo says

Looks quite good for a first one.

Add line-height to your CSS for all paragraphs. The lines are to close to each other now.

Consider giving your buttons in the navigation bar an orange color scheme. A bit darker than the navigation bar colors will probably work well.

The green buttons don’t really work together with the other green buttons.

Add some copyright statement to your footer.

Keep up the good work!

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tylermcrobert says

I’d play around with the line height. Also, make all the green buttons the same shade of green

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tylermcrobert says

Looks quite good for a first one.

Add line-height to your CSS for all paragraphs. The lines are to close to each other now.

Consider giving your buttons in the navigation bar an orange color scheme. A bit darker than the navigation bar colors will probably work well.

The green buttons don’t really work together with the other green buttons.

Add some copyright statement to your footer.

Keep up the good work!

Couldn’t have said it better myself

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Lamovo says


Looks quite good for a first one.

Add line-height to your CSS for all paragraphs. The lines are to close to each other now.

Consider giving your buttons in the navigation bar an orange color scheme. A bit darker than the navigation bar colors will probably work well.

The green buttons don’t really work together with the other green buttons.

Add some copyright statement to your footer.

Keep up the good work!
Couldn’t have said it better myself

Glad we’re on one line about that :P

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agodesa says

Looks quite good for a first one.

Add line-height to your CSS for all paragraphs. The lines are to close to each other now.

Consider giving your buttons in the navigation bar an orange color scheme. A bit darker than the navigation bar colors will probably work well.

The green buttons don’t really work together with the other green buttons.

Add some copyright statement to your footer.

Keep up the good work!

Hey, I made some changes already. Check it out!

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tylermcrobert says

In /about.html I’d have your picture in the right column

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pixelnourish says

Feedback if this is your final site, otherwise ignore :)

You have Lorem Ipsum content in your “Portfolio” section, and it seems the “Services” and “Contact” pages are broken.

Also all the green buttons in the content on your homepage don’t link anywhere.

Not bad for a newbie! I guess that’s what they call beginner’s luck? lol joking :)

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agodesa says

Feedback if this is your final site, otherwise ignore :)

You have Lorem Ipsum content in your “Portfolio” section, and it seems the “Services” and “Contact” pages are broken.

Also all the green buttons in the content on your homepage don’t link anywhere.

Not bad for a newbie! I guess that’s what they call beginner’s luck? lol joking :)

I already updated! Please give me more FEEDBACK !

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Lamovo says

I already updated! Please give me more FEEDBACK !

You are very eager to get feedback … but that’s a good thing.

albus@albus.com is not a valid email address according to your contact form. Your contact form’s usability increases if you list each error inline (under or next to the related field).

Don’t forget to to try your website yourself first. On the contactpage the navigation bar says the services page is active. You can see that too.

Your h1 and h2 can use a little bit more differentation. Adjust the font-size, font-weight, font-style or background-color to create a greater contrast. The headings on the homepage are lacking a bit of margin.

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