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RobbyDesigns says

Here’s my first attept at a website template for ThemeForest. I think it’s going just fine but I think it lacks something – whaddya reckon?
I made the Snowboard design just for rough and am thinking about a more corporate image to take it’s place.

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der says

Nice design, I like your minimalistic approach and the black/gray combination. Typography looks awsome, keep up the good work!

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RobbyDesigns says

Cheers Der, anyone else please?

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coatsd says

I’m no design professional, or web designer at all, but from a usability point of view you may want just a little more separation with your navigation. But minimalistic typography is awesome!

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RobbyDesigns says

Thanks but I’m not sure I’ll be submitting this to TF as they probably wouldn’t like it and I don’t have time to spend designing to their liking – I prefer to be more independent.

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Pixelworkshop says

Is the navigation floating in the vertical middle ? I would see something to “hold” it (container). Did you use a grid ? I usually try to make my work fit into a 1024 resolution but yours seem a bit larger no ? Anyway, that’s a good one :) !

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RobbyDesigns says
Is the navigation floating in the vertical middle ? I would see something to “hold” it (container). Did you use a grid ? I usually try to make my work fit into a 1024 resolution but yours seem a bit larger no ? Anyway, that’s a good one :) !
Yes the Nav is in a container and no, it’s less than 1024. :)
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Pixelworkshop says

You could be interested by this, good luck !

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