My flyer needs improvement

The flyer here requires much more work into the typographThe flyer here requires much more work into the typography quality as well as the graphics works. Also you need to consider cleaning up the design here, remove some elements, organize the flyer better, work on making the flyer concept more unique.

sangar mas bro. apa ini di soft reject?

meisuseno said
sangar mas bro. apa ini di soft reject?

Iya gan . . .