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cooledition says

hi guys this is my first logo and it was rejected, i need some help to improve it. Plz just dont say things like “i dont like it”, “it is awful” etc. Yes, i need honest opinions but i also need your advices to improve the logo.

and here is the logo

thank you :)

oh, and this is the note by the reviewer:

“Your file has some well done design concepts, however it does not meet the current and very stringent quality guidelines and we can not accept your file at this time.”

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cooledition says
xstortionist said
This should be in the item discussion forum. Can a mod please move this thread?

weird, im 100% sure i selected item discussion category

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PatrikL Reviewer says

Moved to Item Discussion

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glenngoh says

Look kinda messy inside. Don’t get me wrong, the concept is good. However, I will probably make the mess a bit more organize. Try looking into the detail as well. Look out for edges that doesn’t cross well.

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cooledition says
glenngoh said
Look kinda messy inside. Don’t get me wrong, the concept is good. However, I will probably make the mess a bit more organize. Try looking into the detail as well. Look out for edges that doesn’t cross well.

dont worry, i appreciate your feeback, honest and helpful feedback is what I’m looking for :)

and yes, i think i will do it more organized inside

thank you dude

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cooledition says
xstortionist said
I think it could use some refinements as far as the shapes within the round icon. Also, what is the open space for within the middle of the icon? I wasn’t able to get a feel for that section. I think you have a great start and a nice concept going. Just needs a bit more work.

thanks for the feedback, i will work on what you guys suggested :)

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