hi guys this is my first logo and it was rejected, i need some help to improve it. Plz just dont say things like “i dont like it”, “it is awful” etc. Yes, i need honest opinions but i also need your advices to improve the logo.
and here is the logo

thank you 
oh, and this is the note by the reviewer:
“Your file has some well done design concepts, however it does not meet the current and very stringent quality guidelines and we can not accept your file at this time.”
This should be in the item discussion forum.
Can a mod please move this thread?
xstortionist said
This should be in the item discussion forum. Can a mod please move this thread?
weird, im 100% sure i selected item discussion category
- Microlancer Beta Tester
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Moved to Item Discussion
cooledition said
xstortionist saidweird, im 100% sure i selected item discussion category
This should be in the item discussion forum. Can a mod please move this thread?
When it gets moved there. I’ll give you my feedback.
Look kinda messy inside. Don’t get me wrong, the concept is good. However, I will probably make the mess a bit more organize. Try looking into the detail as well. Look out for edges that doesn’t cross well.
glenngoh said
Look kinda messy inside. Don’t get me wrong, the concept is good. However, I will probably make the mess a bit more organize. Try looking into the detail as well. Look out for edges that doesn’t cross well.
dont worry, i appreciate your feeback, honest and helpful feedback is what I’m looking for 
and yes, i think i will do it more organized inside
thank you dude
I think it could use some refinements as far as the shapes within the round icon. Also, what is the open space for within the middle of the icon? I wasn’t able to get a feel for that section.
I think you have a great start and a nice concept going. Just needs a bit more work.
xstortionist said
I think it could use some refinements as far as the shapes within the round icon. Also, what is the open space for within the middle of the icon? I wasn’t able to get a feel for that section. I think you have a great start and a nice concept going. Just needs a bit more work.
thanks for the feedback, i will work on what you guys suggested 
