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Final_Step says

Hi everyone, I wanted to share with you my new project called “The Dark Alley”. Please leave a comment describing what should i improve, you can also say in general whether you like it or not.

So here is the video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Co9GCCNKgWU

It still not finished, i will add some more place holders…

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Final_Step says

Hi Guys, leave some comments here please !

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miseld says
Hi Guys, leave some comments here please !

Nice start, good shadows, nice camera shake, try to turn on motion blur and add little fast blur to bricks and also try to dark just a bit more complete scene, that is my opinion

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Final_Step says

Hi guys, it is the improved project ! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeCDMSsrvH4

Please comment !

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Daniel_R says

I really like it Daniel…looks awesome…keep the good work

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Final_Step says

Hi, finally i got a reply ! LOL Thanks man, have you seen the new uploaded video in my channel ? I have deleted the previous one.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FNojeIZ1VII

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nemo276 says

Looks good. If I may, I would suggest something subtle yet effective to top icing on this cake. If you can, add a touch of dust to the text as they land. Not over do it but just enough to know it’s there when the text lands. The walls look kind of plain, where I’m from, we have em marked up. Maybe put some pics or graffiti on the walls but again, not over do it, just enough to know it’s there. Finally, the text is the main point of focus so maybe add depth of field to stress focus on the text.

Little things that may or may not bring more life to it.

Nemo

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