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pxlzero says

Hello :)

Guys I’m crying :D I got rejected on this project. here is the video preview:
The rejected reason (Standard quality)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hdeDxTZrF4U
http://youtu.be/MPwV7SOaAsI

I spent much of time on this project :) please any suggestions to make it more attractive really I need your opinion about my project :)

Thanks :)

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mothinkers says

Hi Pixelzero

I personally like your project and i don’t see anything “wrong”with it. I’m sure you can’t use the fb or twitter logo here on videohive though so you should do a preview with the videohive or envato logo.

What I personally reconsider is the backgroung.. I find the white stripes on unecessay.. But that’s only my opinion and this doesn’t change the quality of your work.

Hope some more navigate “videohiver” can help you.
Good luck!

Federico

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GhosTeam says
Did the reviewer tell you the reason for rejection?

A few ideas:
  • Change the typography/fonts of the bottom text, make it simple, smaller and I’d try without a stroke.
  • Try upgrading the look of the logo itself, it almost looks too simple.
  • As Stro88 said, a clean background is more appealing to my taste as well.
  • Add detail in the electronics chips, maybe a movement of an electric pulses along the grid- from the center outwards. In the part when the audio is “fully loading” :) hope you get what I mean…
  • another idea – more detail to the glowing ring…maybe a gentle white part that’s rotating around it, or a light that comes behind it.

Hope this helps :) Good luck!
GT.
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pxlzero says

Hi Pixelzero

I personally like your project and i don’t see anything “wrong”with it. I’m sure you can’t use the fb or twitter logo here on videohive though so you should do a preview with the videohive or envato logo.

What I personally reconsider is the backgroung.. I find the white stripes on unecessay.. But that’s only my opinion and this doesn’t change the quality of your work.

Hope some more navigate “videohiver” can help you.
Good luck!

Federico

Yeah me too I don’t see anything wrong with the template, maybe I have to work more on it :)
I made one for Video hive logo :) Check this one :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iUz22M0BSGI
And as I know it’s legal to use FB logo or Twitter logo or any social media logo :)
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pxlzero says

Did the reviewer tell you the reason for rejection?

A few ideas:
  • Change the typography/fonts of the bottom text, make it simple, smaller and I’d try without a stroke.
  • Try upgrading the look of the logo itself, it almost looks too simple.
  • As Stro88 said, a clean background is more appealing to my taste as well.
  • Add detail in the electronics chips, maybe a movement of an electric pulses along the grid- from the center outwards. In the part when the audio is “fully loading” :) hope you get what I mean…
  • another idea – more detail to the glowing ring…maybe a gentle white part that’s rotating around it, or a light that comes behind it.

Hope this helps :) Good luck!
GT.

Thank you for your amazing Ideas :) I will try my best to make it more creative. I actually when I got rejected email I feel like a hammer fell on my head hehe :D:D:D

The reviewer rejected reasons : doesn’t match our standard quality

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GhosTeam says
Don’t give up, upgrade your project ….look through VideoHive and watch items in the same “vibe” as yours … see what the standard is…

Two I really like: http://videohive.net/item/power-on-logo/3666897 http://videohive.net/item/neologo/3822862

GT.

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NOVAPLUS says

The video is very short and I think it is difficult to set the price, so not worth the quality standard …

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simlos says

hi,

as ghosteam already mentioned put in some details, for me it also looks very static, even if you have animated your elements (they are always at the same position and scale) – there is no “story”. maybe i would start with a more detailed view of the circuit board and zoom back to the total, but this would lead to a new different template and much work. so its only some input from me… greetings simlos

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Permaloop says

Did the reviewer tell you the reason for rejection?

A few ideas:
  • Change the typography/fonts of the bottom text, make it simple, smaller and I’d try without a stroke.
  • Try upgrading the look of the logo itself, it almost looks too simple.
  • As Stro88 said, a clean background is more appealing to my taste as well.
  • Add detail in the electronics chips, maybe a movement of an electric pulses along the grid- from the center outwards. In the part when the audio is “fully loading” :) hope you get what I mean…
  • another idea – more detail to the glowing ring…maybe a gentle white part that’s rotating around it, or a light that comes behind it.

Hope this helps :) Good luck!
GT.

I totally agree with GhosTeam, already gave you very nice ideas. You can also add a pulse of energy in the begining from outwards to the center to transfer power to the center ring and the other elements. Your item has great potential. Good luck!!

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pxlzero says

Thank you guys for criticisms, I will add this points to the template:
• Add detail in the electronics chips, maybe a movement of an electric pulses along the grid- from the center outwards. In the part when the audio is “fully loading”
• doing some zoom in and out for the logo (or I will make it 2 clip one close shoot and the other long shoot)
• Adding some details to the background.
• change the font.
And this idea it’s really nice :) thanks “Permaloop”
(pulse of energy in the beginning from outwards to the center to transfer power to the center ring)

Many thanks guys :)

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