Any idea what I can improve? All comments are welcome.
I don’t understand what I’m looking at, is the above the entire project? It doesn’t seem to make any sense.
Envato Marketplaces Team Message:
Unfortunately your submission Hostlab – Responsive Device Template isn’t ready for ThemeForest and cannot be resubmitted as it did not meet our minimum requirements for quality and/or marketplace policies. In order for submissions to be considered for sale they must be of high aesthetic and technical quality, unique to our library and cannot be in violation of Envato’s policies.
What is Hostlab?
This template adapts to any device. It has no fixed sizes for specific devices, and runs on any screen size, and orientation.
Mobile & Tablet Responsive Website Template, HTML5 + CSS3, which is perfectly designed and developed for your business website.
How to Use It?
This template project is ideal for personal and blog websites that requires components with a modern style and smooth transitions.
Any idea what I can improve? Thank tou
It’s not obvious enough what you’re trying to accomplish with this template. The words “Hostlab, Docx, and Shortx” seem to be fictional words that I don’t understand (and I’m assuming buyers wouldn’t understand either).
Maybe you can start by helping us out by telling us:
1. Who is your target audience / buyer?
2. What are the main features of your template?
Sorry to say but this is WAY off. As others said, it is chaotic. You probably wanted to create something unique, but you ended up with something which doesn’t make any sense.
when you are starting off doing webdesign don’t try to create something super creative. It sounds weird but it’s true. Before you push boundaries you have to master the current state of the art first. Take this theme for example: http://themeforest.net/item/aura-responsive-multipurpose-template-v181/7786132 it might seem like easy doing a design like that but truth is: it isn’t! Take this or any other more “common” theme on the marketplace and try building something similar – it will help you a lot learning about designing themes. Once you managed to design a beautiful “normal” theme – go ahead and do something unique.
The site you posted a link to here will not be accepted – no matter how much you change or improve on the layout. It has no focus, layout or functionality, sorry
Hope it helps a bit.