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Vexler says

Hi, I made a theme that has been rejected, I think the Reason is a design. demo for Red Pen

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LoveThemes says

You need to spend much more time learning design you are nowhere near ready to be submitting themes yet.

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Vexler says

Thanks iKreativ, surely you are right and seems aware of that and I know that you are not from science, but I would be grateful for your constructive criticism.

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Vexler says

More suggestions Please :)

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vishnusathyan says

sorry to say, everything looks basic. nothing unique about it.

goodluck :)

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Vexler says

Thanks vishnusathyan

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Vexler says

Hi I’m trying to improve my work sharp criticism indicated. Red Pen

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Vexler says

Hey, any suggestions ??

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FlatKing says

Red pen is fucking up for me so I’ll just type it

You really need to listen to the guys above, this is a really really badly designed template. If this is coded I suggest you team up with a designer because this doesn’t need a little bit of refining. All of the fonts looks out of place, different sizes and colours. The colours you’ve used don’t go with each other the red / pink on the wood just looks bad, the fonts are way too big all the way through I’d suggest going through dribbble or something to help you get an idea oh what you should be doing, what looks good and why it does

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Vexler says

Thanks FlatKing.

Regards !

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