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Theme4rest
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Hi All, I created a comming soon page “Avari-Responsive Comming Soon Page” but it was rejected with usual msg from themeforest. Anybody can tell me what’s wrong with my theme. Good suggestions will b apprecited plz b sincere, iam depressed. here is the link http://designfolio.tk/Avari/Avari/
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organicbee
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I just get a black screen nothing loads

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goofydadog
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Nice. But the sliding text is backwards?

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ZERGE
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As for me:

in Countdown: - No difference between the color of the text and the title; - Slightly reduce the distance between the social icons; - The copyrights to put at the center of social icons (for class ‘social’: padding-left: 0); - Logo can be a little less?

in Services: - No difference between the color of the text and the title; - large icons are barely visible;

in Subscribe: - button, and text field are not aligned; - Border in the text field is not styled;

in Contact Us: - No difference between the color of the text and the title; - Maybe add a form to send messages?

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Hi ZERGE, I am very thankful to u. I’ll make necessary improvements then upload. Hope that will save me to face rejection. Thanks!

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wwwebinvader
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If you have time, you can also add video background. More settings template – more unique.

On my machine not always displaying information in tab “Contact Us” – http://i.imgur.com/DRyBh2W.jpg I see some bug with dribbble icon http://i.imgur.com/Fumkqs4.png – 5 pixels are red (pink) on hover. (chrome)

Good Luck!

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Sebastian_Laborde
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In iPad goes wrong, it is sliding to the right

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Theme4rest
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Thanks wwwebinvader!

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george-olaru
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PS: Such a ‘great’ way to improve this design guys :)

I think you just had a bad start – try again from scratch and focus on hierarchy and composition first. Also not forget about the use of a proper content – there are too many errors, both gramatically and of punctuation.

At this point – you shouldn’t aim to have the template approved – instead, try to improve your skills and make a better design.

Best,
George

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