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tcfatale
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Hi,

My theme has been rejected 6 times. lol… Basically over the design of the About Us page. I’ve changed it every time and my reviewer says that it’s getting worse. So, it was recommended that I ask around the forum for help.

Some of the reasons for the About Us page-

-Needs more imagination and it is too plain at the moment

-Its just a mix of homepage and some existing info? This doesn’t solve the problem.

I’m getting discouraged… So if there could be any feedback, I’d appreciate that.

http://rmotionpro.com/themes/?page_id=230
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Zorthemes
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try adding some images of team members…and maybe links to their social profiles you can look at some themes here for inspiration and I dont think using cufon for paragraphs is a good practice..Im not sure tho

GOOD LUCK !!

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tcfatale
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Thank you Ragzor. I will try your suggestions:)

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eddiesaints
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I hate to be rude, but I think that this design isn’t going to work. Remember, this is a product to be sold, needs a certain level of quality. Right now, I don’t see a good design. Inconsistency, lack of alignments, bad typography…

I would try another concept, good luck. :)

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dekciw
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cufon for body copy? :/

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tcfatale
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Okay… So I have a lot to do.. Smh. Thanks for the feedback ya’ll. I appreciate it.

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