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mcoban says

Hi my template rejected and I need your advice please. Reason was that The core design is just too simple and will need improvements before it can be improved. As is, it feels like elements floating on a page instead of a cohesive design.

Preview: http://cbnart.com/cbnConstruction

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htmgarcia says

Good start. Maybe for the reviewer was too simple.

The percent text is out of the div.

Good luck with improvements!

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solybarr says

Maybe adding a dummy logo will help.. ? Maybe the progress bar can be a different shade of the main color.. seems like a lot of the same..

I can hardly see the countdown numbers.. :(

What TOTALLY rulez is your Options panel!!!!!!!!!!!

Good luck.. S.

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stephanus168 says

Hi my template rejected and I need your advice please. Reason was that The core design is just too simple and will need improvements before it can be improved. As is, it feels like elements floating on a page instead of a cohesive design. Preview: http://cbnart.com/cbnConstruction

Try to make more different than just it was, like adding tab with some preview of the company, small portfolio, short about us, etc, make it with nice effect, hopefully it can helps :-)

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PressLayer says

Too many text in small space. I think you should make text larger also give more contrast.

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UXbarn says

In addition to the replies above, you may try to change the color of text shadow. I think the current one looks too sharp. ;)

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mcoban says

In addition to the replies above, you may try to change the color of text shadow. I think the current one looks too sharp. ;)

what colour do you advice ?

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mcoban says

Again again and again. This is my 4th submission and rejected again. I wonder why?

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rayoflightt says

I don’t like the font it’s somehow old-fashioned. Also background pattern is too simple and not discrete enough, colors are depressive. And most annoying for me why twitter text and logo are so big? It seems like that is the most important part of the page just after “coming soon” text. Are you sure it has to be that way?

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mcoban says

I don’t like the font it’s somehow old-fashioned. Also background pattern is too simple and not discrete enough, colors are depressive. And most annoying for me why twitter text and logo are so big? It seems like that is the most important part of the page just after “coming soon” text. Are you sure it has to be that way?

of course I’m sure..

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