DistinctiveThemes
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DistinctiveThemes
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Hey folks

Just had a template thrown back at me with usual message and am looking for any input for you fine folk

Here is a grab of the submitted design if anyone has any thoughts id really appreciate some input

http://www.distinctivethemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/07/02_full_preview.jpg
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ChapterThemes
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One thing i imediatly notice is i can hardly read the text, it’s way too small.

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manuelvega
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I agree with the small text, make it bigger .. also get in touch section looks empty

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DistinctiveThemes
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thanks for the input folks, the screen grab was on a really high resolution 23inch screen so the font does look small, its around 14px at smallest tbh! but i really should have pointed it out.

Im gonna add a couple of sections and make more use of the parallax bg on some sections to see if that helps

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Dzinc
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This thread is now in › Item Discussion

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DistinctiveThemes
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Here are some progress shots of the template showing both versions im bundling together – just had a reject and need some new input from critical eyes

http://awesomescreenshot.com/0451i6q78a http://awesomescreenshot.com/0e01i6qgb8

Be as tough as you like, im open to ideas

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