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atwozfree says

Hi, I made this Fresh Multi-Purpose PSD Template so I need your feedback. And also what do you guys think of the design?

Thanks in Advance. http://www.atwozfree.com/screenshots/01-Home.jpg http://www.atwozfree.com/screenshots/02-Home.jpg http://www.atwozfree.com/screenshots/03-Home.jpg
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A good start, but needs a lot of polish!

1. Header doesn’t feel premium at all, the background color hurts my eyes to be honest and although the shadows look realistic, this is a very over saturated feature! You page inclines toward a flat design, that shadow doesn’t belong there http://cl.ly/image/2u3g3P2i0i1h

2. http://cl.ly/image/2Q0O0j0E0T15 This area really needs a lot of improvements, the current visual hierarchy is nonexistent, spacing between the buttons is not there, the buttons have a very dark shadow, I’m not sure it’s quite appealing to the eye. The “enter your e-mail address ” really needs more space after it!

3. http://cl.ly/image/1a390i3B0k1D Font improvements, overall spacing, and visual hierachy of the box need much more attention. To much space at the top, the icon looks out of position.

4. http://cl.ly/image/3x2T2F070l0W The white shadow is nice for the text but the gray background is needs to be softer. Try using #252525, with 0.1 layer opacity, see what happens! :)

5. http://cl.ly/image/3E3l3W0z1E1f As I see your page is destined for desktops, never use fonts smaller than 10 pixels in the body as they are really really hard to read. A laptop user can see them properly, but sit at a desk, 30 centimeters from the screen and it’s going to be difficult.

6. http://cl.ly/image/170U1e1O3k2Z a softer tone of gray, the current gray nuance, set it at 0.3, and give the shadow beneeth it more spread!

7. http://cl.ly/image/281v0e3t3h1f the footer should be redone completely, as there is no visual hierarchy, font letter spacing is too big, font sizes and colors don’t match, adn the background could use some improvement!

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atwozfree says

A good start, but needs a lot of polish!

1. Header doesn’t feel premium at all, the background color hurts my eyes to be honest and although the shadows look realistic, this is a very over saturated feature! You page inclines toward a flat design, that shadow doesn’t belong there http://cl.ly/image/2u3g3P2i0i1h

2. http://cl.ly/image/2Q0O0j0E0T15 This area really needs a lot of improvements, the current visual hierarchy is nonexistent, spacing between the buttons is not there, the buttons have a very dark shadow, I’m not sure it’s quite appealing to the eye. The “enter your e-mail address ” really needs more space after it!

3. http://cl.ly/image/1a390i3B0k1D Font improvements, overall spacing, and visual hierachy of the box need much more attention. To much space at the top, the icon looks out of position.

4. http://cl.ly/image/3x2T2F070l0W The white shadow is nice for the text but the gray background is needs to be softer. Try using #252525, with 0.1 layer opacity, see what happens! :)

5. http://cl.ly/image/3E3l3W0z1E1f As I see your page is destined for desktops, never use fonts smaller than 10 pixels in the body as they are really really hard to read. A laptop user can see them properly, but sit at a desk, 30 centimeters from the screen and it’s going to be difficult.

6. http://cl.ly/image/170U1e1O3k2Z a softer tone of gray, the current gray nuance, set it at 0.3, and give the shadow beneeth it more spread!

7. http://cl.ly/image/281v0e3t3h1f the footer should be redone completely, as there is no visual hierarchy, font letter spacing is too big, font sizes and colors don’t match, adn the background could use some improvement!

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Thanks :) I will do this changes thanks again

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atwozfree says


A good start, but needs a lot of polish!

1. Header doesn’t feel premium at all, the background color hurts my eyes to be honest and although the shadows look realistic, this is a very over saturated feature! You page inclines toward a flat design, that shadow doesn’t belong there http://cl.ly/image/2u3g3P2i0i1h

2. http://cl.ly/image/2Q0O0j0E0T15 This area really needs a lot of improvements, the current visual hierarchy is nonexistent, spacing between the buttons is not there, the buttons have a very dark shadow, I’m not sure it’s quite appealing to the eye. The “enter your e-mail address ” really needs more space after it!

3. http://cl.ly/image/1a390i3B0k1D Font improvements, overall spacing, and visual hierachy of the box need much more attention. To much space at the top, the icon looks out of position.

4. http://cl.ly/image/3x2T2F070l0W The white shadow is nice for the text but the gray background is needs to be softer. Try using #252525, with 0.1 layer opacity, see what happens! :)

5. http://cl.ly/image/3E3l3W0z1E1f As I see your page is destined for desktops, never use fonts smaller than 10 pixels in the body as they are really really hard to read. A laptop user can see them properly, but sit at a desk, 30 centimeters from the screen and it’s going to be difficult.

6. http://cl.ly/image/170U1e1O3k2Z a softer tone of gray, the current gray nuance, set it at 0.3, and give the shadow beneeth it more spread!

7. http://cl.ly/image/281v0e3t3h1f the footer should be redone completely, as there is no visual hierarchy, font letter spacing is too big, font sizes and colors don’t match, adn the background could use some improvement!

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Thanks :) I will do this changes thanks again

Hi i have changed this design

http://www.atwozfree.com/screenshots/01-Home.jpg

Thanks :)

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Enabled Volunteer moderator says

Awesome! Wow! Quite a transformation! One thing though, http://cl.ly/image/02050K1d0H3Z , there is nothing to the right of the Our Services text and it just makes the page look a little bloated, remove that heading and make equal spaces between the ball and the decoration!

Other than that, I like it! :) A lot! Great job!

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atwozfree says

Awesome! Wow! Quite a transformation! One thing though, http://cl.ly/image/02050K1d0H3Z , there is nothing to the right of the Our Services text and it just makes the page look a little bloated, remove that heading and make equal spaces between the ball and the decoration!

Other than that, I like it! :) A lot! Great job!

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Thanks :)

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