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isoolt
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i need your feedback before upload my html template

according to this thread
http://themeforest.net/forums/thread/need-feedback/116541

and thanks to mafloral and charlie4282, i redesigned my template from scratch and now i have this one

Link

Do you think it’s ready now :)

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smithy6300
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looks promising and nice layout plus it looks like something different..good luck

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isoolt
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smithy6300 thanks

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TridentBase
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Though I haven’t submitted any theme yet, I can give you a short suggestion! I think you should change the typography before submitting the theme. Try any kind of serif font, I think that will do.

Thanks.

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isoolt
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Though I haven’t submitted any theme yet, I can give you a short suggestion! I think you should change the typography before submitting the theme. Try any kind of serif font, I think that will do. Thanks.

thanks IzzyThemes i will consider your advice

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charlie4282
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A vast improvement!

Still not a fan of those heading fonts – the design would so much more refined with a more serif font.

The 4th footer widget is a really nice touch but again that font ruins it

On contact differentiate the 3 columns under the map and make the social counters full circles (likewise services)

On team page increase spacing between titles and staff members

Social sharing on portfolio items

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isoolt
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A vast improvement!

Still not a fan of those heading fonts – the design would so much more refined with a more serif font.

The 4th footer widget is a really nice touch but again that font ruins it

On contact differentiate the 3 columns under the map and make the social counters full circles (likewise services)

On team page increase spacing between titles and staff members

Social sharing on portfolio items

thanks for your advice i will work for it

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Nitro_Themes
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Hey Man

Looking great man.

The latest work pop up, add some nav arrows to navigate between them.

The footer patter #3 is not that great man. Try another image or pattern. The footer widget tiles, get rid of the double lines and float the titles to the left.

Add a 1 pixel border to the footer bottom to have a bit of separation from the footer above it.

The teaser boxes titles and text should be to the left not centered. It looks messy like that. Or at least just the text not the title.

The rest of the template looks really good the only other thing that i am not sure of is the pattern #1 i think maybe you should just use a color or try another pattern.

Good luck man.

Lester

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isoolt
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Hey Man

Looking great man.

The latest work pop up, add some nav arrows to navigate between them.

The footer patter #3 is not that great man. Try another image or pattern. The footer widget tiles, get rid of the double lines and float the titles to the left.

Add a 1 pixel border to the footer bottom to have a bit of separation from the footer above it.

The teaser boxes titles and text should be to the left not centered. It looks messy like that. Or at least just the text not the title.

The rest of the template looks really good the only other thing that i am not sure of is the pattern #1 i think maybe you should just use a color or try another pattern.

Good luck man.

Lester

sorry but you missed the link the new link

http://gothic.royalwebhosting.net/Melon/
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fidaktk
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work on typography. about us pages. padding spacing problems.

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