need feedback for 2 flyers

Hello guys, can you tell me if this 2 will be accepted? they are nice and clean thnx

i don’t think so , from my rejections experience the styles and the girls are way too big for the rest of the flyer and you need to leave space for addresses and djs names, photos.

ok tnx, I changed the text and leave space for adress etc.

I love the “Easter” text, but you need to work on typography all over. It doesn’t look like you’ve worked too much with it, just thrown it in there. Keep on working with it

Good luck!