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DanielKeller says

ok so to keep it short, this is my landingpage mock-up and I need feedback on it

it probably needs a lot of work more, I just need some more tips..

what you think?

http://forrst-production.s3.amazonaws.com/posts/snaps/59786/original.png

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InterantMedia says

Hey Daniel,

Looks great, although I think you can improve some things:

  • The button needs more work: shadows and such.
  • Try to use more than one font, this will look more diverse.
  • It might be a great idea to add photographs and videos, just to add colors.
  • A footer in another color would be great, for example dark grey with white text.

You can always contact us if you need help with for example buttons or so, we would like to help you if we can! Good luck!

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stefusilviu says

The email submission form is a little strange. Make it a bit smaller but visible. Like InterantMedia sayd before, ad some color to your design and to the bottom bar you may reduce the number of icons.

Just an oppinion.

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DanielKeller says

thanks guys, useful tips… all others, feel free to comment

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