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thomask3r says

So I’ve been working on this project for a couple of days now, but I’m still not sure if it meets the quality requirements. What do you think?

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Improved (I think):

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Still need feedback! :)

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LuisFaus says

Even though the concept is fine, in my opinion the background is too flat, therefore it doesnt attract any attention towards it. The fonts are ok, but the main word “drinks” ( which i see it has a leathery texture) is also quite flat. Think of adding volume to all the leather elements, cast shadows, add stitches, lights, etc. But its a good beginning.

*btw, personaly I like more the text structure of the first flyer

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thomask3r says

I see what you mean. I’ll try and fix it up a bit :)

Thanks!

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How about this?

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Maybe like this? A little more depth in the background.

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Amrhamza says

no no no no the first flyer is the most elegant , keep working on that one but change some things like the date is n’t that important to be bigger than the main event the door open could be above the footnotes put lets get the part started above drinks make the skin as a pattern then apply it on a layer make the particle slightly smaller make the the date much smaller and add a photo of a concert and goodluck

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thomask3r says

Hm, ok.. Thank you very much :) I guess there’s much work left then.

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