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mojo1986 says

this is the message from reviewer

Unfortunately your submission Raduiz – Responsive vCard Template isn’t quite ready for ThemeForest.

Additionally, we have some extra feedback for you:

This file has some great colors and a nice concept but the typography needs significant work. It needs improvements in the styles it offers and the general visual hierarchy.

Some articles to help you with this:

http://www.alistapart.com/articles/on-web-typography http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/design-theory/understanding-visual-hierarchy-in-web-design/ http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/typography-articles/eight-important-factors-of-good-web-typography/

this is demo url : http://mojo.ps/raduiz/

any help

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mojo1986 says

any help ?

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2Fwebd says
Hi mojo ! Good job, very unique, I like it ;) But you need to improve the typography: change the font. Then I think you should change the construction of some pages:
  • Contact: The map is too small, it should be better with a big map in the background (like this: here)
  • Resume: main aspect seems unworked…
Finaly, small circles near the title pages shouldn’t be in white but colored (same colors as the titles).

Just my opinion, hope it will help you ;)
Regards,

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mojo1986 says

thank you doubleF i’m happy for your opinion i think that must be doing ,,

,, and need more help :)

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manuelvega says

you have it under control ;) , improove the typo .

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mojo1986 says

thanks manuelvega but , i don’t understand . what you mean exactly :)

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manuelvega says

i mean ur theme its good and is almost ready for tf , its a good concept but need more polish , u need improve typeface navigation , the profile p & h2 maybe too , the rest its fine . hope you have luck

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mojo1986 says

thanks .. now i understand you :)

i will apply the changes and upload it :)

thank you ,, and want more help :)

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mojo1986 says

another time rejected !!

Unfortunately your submission Raduiz – Responsive vCard Template isn’t quite ready for ThemeForest.

Additionally, we have some extra feedback for you:

I’m sorry but the earlier review stands. I’m not seeing sufficient improvements here. Your item does not provide the necessary design quality for ThemeForest. As higher quality templates become available in the marketplace, approval requirements will increase to maintain appropriate marketplace quality.

Usually, I’d be able to provide more specific feedback but I’m afraid that isn’t the case here. Every aspect of your design will need to be improved significantly specially the typography. You will need to make some additional improvements in overall aesthetics and aspects such as typography and the quality of the graphics.

any help !!

this is the demo url : http://mojo.ps/raduiz/

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manuelvega says

you has replaced the files on your hosting? I dont see changes on typography or navigation bar , or maybe I did not realize because are minimal ? I got that message once , if your rejection is hard they need to see a complete change in your site appearance , he said ” I’m not seeing sufficient improvements here ” , I do not see them and “Every aspect of your design will need to be improved significantly specially the typography” , you need work on that .

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