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SwitchVisual
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got my project rejected how can i improve? what should i have done better? =) thanks in advance

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SynergyCG
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For me, I like the way those images appear. I like the effects on those images as well. BUT those are not blending with background. its like they are two separate elements. plus as the animation goes on you wont see any action to hold your viewers to it. do something with the angels.. animation should have a crescendo.. then end with a nice logo or text reveal… hope u got what i mean

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SwitchVisual
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yeah you are right, I see your point thanks for taking the time :) Ill work on it

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SynergyCG
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No worries bro.. u r welcome

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