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RacksDesigns says

Please leave feedback anything will help.

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ToivoMedia says

It’s not bad, but it’s under developed. Some parts look too plain I think, especially the top. The typography would need improvement as well. Hope that helps :)

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RacksDesigns says

It’s not bad, but it’s under developed. Some parts look too plain I think, especially the top. The typography would need improvement as well. Hope that helps :)

Thanks.

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RacksDesigns says

What about now?

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glenngoh says

I will prefer to see the badge with the texture like your first one.

I like that you added the ball thing to fill up the emptiness. Try make it dynamic. Currently, both looks the same size to me and seems duplicated. Try give them different blur and sizes to depict different depth. You can have 1 clear and the other blur as well.

You need to work on your typography. Currently, you are using too many different fonts. Compare ‘monday’, ‘12.24.2012’, ‘presented by: your sponsor’ and ‘party’. All of them are different fonts and it creates a distraction. There isn’t a dominant font throughout and it seems that everyone of them are fighting for attention. In a good design, you need to have a dominant and sub-dominant elements. Dominant element are the main focus while the sub-dominant compliments the main. I will suggest using only 2 different fonts throughout the design. Use 3 if you are confidence with what you are doing.

All the best.

PS: Sorry for my bad english.

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